Preperation (chapter 22)
As the creators wedding arrives I must prepare myself. I look for where he will be staying on his wedding night and i examine every wall. I soon figure out every way to get into the house, ha the creator has no idea what is coming. He is not ready for me, if he thinks I am evil now well just wait until your wedding night, I will show you what real evil is.
I'm sorry, but it was bugging me. . .Preperation is spelled as preparation. I like that you wrote about what he did before actually killing Elizabeth, but I think you could have included information about his emotions. For example, you could have elaborated on his want for revenge or the pleasure he would feel after killing Elizabeth or even his reasoning behing killing her. Other than that, it's pretty snazzy. :)
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I agree with Sonya!.... (HI SONYA !!!:P) I like the feeling of this entry, how it talks about the future but it seems like the present, as if he's imagining it. That's pretty cool :)
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