Cracking The Soul (chapter 23)
The wedding night had came, and I was watching. The creator had been prancing around with his face showing fear. He had no idea that I had no intention of killing him directly. Instead I wanted to kill him from the inside out, I wanted him to cry himself to sleep everynight with the thought of being alone and then awake in a huge puddle of his own tears! So when he left his heart and soul Elizabeth alone I made my move, I confronted her. When her eyes met mine, they were horrified. It was if she had seen the devil himself pointing his pitchfork right at her eyeballs. I sprang for her neck and she shrieked as hard as any human possibly could, but all I did was keep squeezing! I pictured as though her neck was the creators heart. I had to crush it, I had to squeeze until it popped! I must destroy him for what he did to me! Die! After I saw she had no life in her I left and saw the creators expession on his face. He had now felt true pain that same as i had. Now maybe he will think twice before lying to me.
Wow Alex I think this is a huge step up from where you began. This post shows a lot. Just the way you worded it made it really seem like he truly hated Victor. You used so much imagery that if someone who had not read the book but read the post they would know and see exactly what you’re talking about. The only bad thing was the end where you ended it with “Now maybe he will think twice before lying to me.” You could have explained what he lied about but other than that awesome work.
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